That file browser is nice. Looking through one of the files reminds me of another problem I've had with the Monitor disk images on Bitsavers: not being able to run Editor.obj. The error message mentions something about a font file, if memory serves. It's been a while...
Like everything Monitor, this feels fixable with some hacking. Even the fact of not being able to boot off the hard drive feels negotiable. The format document you've provided says "Blocks 0 and 1 are the boot blocks", and that ought to be plenty to fit a bootloader that can read the simple filesystem. We have source code for Monitor 11.6, and this might provide hints that would indicate what other changes should be made to the Monitor "kernel" itself (I don't think it calls itself that) so that it's happy to start on a hard disk.
A good reason to do this would be to make a convenient standalone Monitor drive image that can boot the Smalltalk environment that you find on one of the Bitsavers disks. Right now you need a Lisa 1 to run it --- the Monitor in one of the drives and the Smalltalk disk in the other. It's nice if you're patient. (For anyone who feels like trying this: Smalltalk won't run under the version 12 Monitors; I've always run it under 11.6.)
Speaking of bitsavers --- that useful second document you found made me head back to
http://bitsavers.org/pdf/apple/lisa/pascal_monitor/ to see where you'd extracted that text from. I came up short! Do you have a link to the original somewhere? I probably have just not done a good enough job of scanning the PDFs, but I'm curious to know if there are Monitor docs in a different directory that I may have missed.